Aphelion

Thank you, Mark, it's good to be on board.

Hmm, you have certainly given me a lot to think about and I will definitely try out your tip for semicolon/commas as I struggle there. I think perhaps I also need to put a bit more thought into what I want to say in my story rather that settle for light-hearted fluff It is very helpful to receive th...

Lester

Thanks for the input, I always appreciate honest opinions, still learning about writing every day.
The story is supposed to be amusing, although I would never claim to be clever or witty!
Comma and Semicolon misdemeanour has been commented upon twice recently and hopefully will sink in