Aphelion

Reminds me of the Golden Age sci fi and the modern idea-driven sci fi. I enjoyed it.<br><br>Perhaps add a bit more description around the dialogue and put some of the background info. in dialogue into indirect dialogue/summaries?<br><br>Best,<br>Nick Capo<br>(www2.ic.edu/ncapo/)<br><br>

Thanks for the feedback on this story, and I'm sorry for my delayed response. The summer was a chaotic time.<br><br>I did worry about the lack of a direct confrontation in the ending, but I made a conscious choice to keep the focus on Isabella's internal conflict. I hope to return to Isabella in ano...