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by M._Maldonado
December 10, 2005, 12:00:03 AM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: The Point of the Pit By Matthew Maldonado
Replies: 4
Views: 10603

Re: The Point of the Pit By Matthew Maldonado

Very "green" of you. :) I had no doubt that it was all used, since you showed how all the parts were saved. I'm sure the bones went off to the Soylent Soap or Soylent Jello factories. That didn't seem to need mentioning. <br><br>And the Soylent Scrubbing Powder factory!<br><br> Variety like that an...
by M._Maldonado
December 09, 2005, 11:17:27 PM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: The Point of the Pit By Matthew Maldonado
Replies: 4
Views: 10603

Re: The Point of the Pit By Matthew Maldonado

Thanks Matthew, <br><br>You're welcome!<br><br> I hate to admit it, but the end of the story left me wondering what had just occured. I had to go back and read the last few parts. . .after the "When was the last time you saw a cow" parts just to try and get the characters straight as to who was lea...
by M._Maldonado
December 09, 2005, 10:28:30 PM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: The Point of the Pit By Matthew Maldonado
Replies: 4
Views: 10603

Re: The Point of the Pit By Matthew Maldonado

Soylent Green. <br><br>Actually, I didn't think of Soylent Green at ALL when I wrote this. In fact, I knew nothing about the movie aside from that one famous line, and even that didn't enter my consciousness as I wrote this story.<br><br>Furthermore, it wasn't my intention, initially, for that to b...
by M._Maldonado
December 04, 2005, 11:32:07 PM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: Too Late the Hero by Gareth Jones
Replies: 0
Views: 9511

Re: Too Late the Hero by Gareth Jones

I liked this, but thought it was too simple in some places and not taken full advantage of. I think not fleshing the main character out was a mistake; a lot could've been made of his situation if he'd been more of a person and not so much of a caricature.<br><br>The story was entertaining for what i...
by M._Maldonado
December 04, 2005, 11:28:18 PM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: Spaced Out by Daniel Sosa
Replies: 3
Views: 10829

Re: Spaced Out by Daniel Sosa

Well, I'm not sure if I'm the best person to say someone is underdescribing something. After all, I think my own story in November's issue was probably over-written. O.o;<br><br>Zap was originally supposed to be voiced by the same guy who did the Lawyer, I believe, so that's where the similarity the...
by M._Maldonado
November 15, 2005, 10:51:59 PM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: The Kitten Box by Gareth Lyn Powell
Replies: 12
Views: 24561

Re: The Kitten Box by Gareth Lyn Powell

I haven't read the story, but I'd like to point out that I've never heard the litter box called a kitty box. O.o Nor have I heard anyone else call it anything other than litter box, ever.<br><br>I suddenly feel very sheltered. :P<br><br><br>~MM
by M._Maldonado
November 14, 2005, 11:25:21 PM
Forum: November 2005
Topic: Spaced Out by Daniel Sosa
Replies: 3
Views: 10829

Spaced Out by Daniel Sosa

I really enjoyed this story, overall. I found Buck Buckley's cocky, stuck-up inner voice to be very amusing (the same goes for his interaction with the bitter crew and other characters). I'm distinctly reminded of Zap Brannigan, a character from the animated show Futurama (He was just as cocky, obno...

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