Aphelion

I would like to interject, if I may. "My Children" is a pretty cool story. However, I think Nate's words are very useful and beneficial to any writer. <br><br>Understanding that this is a "short story," I don't think it would hurt to get into detail a little further, as he suggests. There are many p...

That's really cute. Made me smile. You should make a comic out of this and send it to a newspaper or magazine or something.