A Wonderful Life by Bob Sanhueza
Posted: October 12, 2007, 09:03:34 PM
Flash Fiction? Too long, but it had all the elements needed.
A nice little story and good twist at the end.
The writing was Okay, but the story was too short to critque it much. However, what I read I liked and
I think that this one could have been stretched into a well crafted short story.
I liked the telling in this story, and the concept of 'bounded worker' which might be possible under
genetic engineering in the future would become one hell of a legal fight, I'm sure.
Too short of a story, but well worth reading!!!
A nice little story and good twist at the end.
The writing was Okay, but the story was too short to critque it much. However, what I read I liked and
I think that this one could have been stretched into a well crafted short story.
I liked the telling in this story, and the concept of 'bounded worker' which might be possible under
genetic engineering in the future would become one hell of a legal fight, I'm sure.
Too short of a story, but well worth reading!!!