Leopold and the Emperor by Sergei Servianov
Posted: June 20, 2012, 08:08:56 PM
What will the post-apocalypse look like at close range?
This . . .
Not much of a plot to speak of, but I wouldn't expect one under the circumstances. Survival is day-to-day, if not minute-by minute. Loyalty -- such as it is -- goes to whomever seems able to keep you alive the longest.
The strength of this piece was in the ever-changing setting and action, and they did an excellent job of bringing the story to life. Characters and dialog were pretty decent, too.
Good work!
This . . .
Not much of a plot to speak of, but I wouldn't expect one under the circumstances. Survival is day-to-day, if not minute-by minute. Loyalty -- such as it is -- goes to whomever seems able to keep you alive the longest.
The strength of this piece was in the ever-changing setting and action, and they did an excellent job of bringing the story to life. Characters and dialog were pretty decent, too.
Good work!