Re: Lightless by Clinton Van Inman
Posted: November 17, 2012, 08:26:58 PM
The first stanza was quite clear, but seemed to have nothing to do with the second -- which in turn seemed to have nothing to do with anything I could comprehend.
A lot of poetry intentionally bypasses our forebrains. Sometimes it works marvelously well. To me, this one didn't.
A lot of poetry intentionally bypasses our forebrains. Sometimes it works marvelously well. To me, this one didn't.