Re: Modification Program By Adam Folgers
Posted: December 21, 2012, 08:37:34 PM
Twilight Zone theme, but the execution (excuse me) is definitely not TZ -- maybe more like Dragnet -- if Dragnet had a Dark Side.
I thought it was a little heavy on jargon, but not to the point of being hard to follow; that gives it an authentic flavor, too. The characters are very convincing.
In the end, I can't help thinking that this C/O's life truly is so shitty that it could logically be considered as punishment for some scumbag. And -- shades of Seanan's article this month -- I do hope the author's life is better than this.
Excellent first effort!
I thought it was a little heavy on jargon, but not to the point of being hard to follow; that gives it an authentic flavor, too. The characters are very convincing.
In the end, I can't help thinking that this C/O's life truly is so shitty that it could logically be considered as punishment for some scumbag. And -- shades of Seanan's article this month -- I do hope the author's life is better than this.
Excellent first effort!