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Re: Who's Watching? By Kasia James

Posted: December 25, 2012, 08:01:58 PM
by Lester Curtis
This story was interesting enough, but I felt that, too much of the time, the information in it came more from Sarah's instincts than it did from hard data.

I liked the setting a lot, from both inside and outside of their habitat. Outside, it was clear that they were floating in the atmosphere of some gas giant, and that was fascinating. But on the inside, we see how the crew becomes lackadaisical about their housekeeping and dress. Sarah is the only one who bothers putting her uniform on, and trash piles up under desks.

It could have been called, "Who's Watching Whom?"