Aphelion

I just spent awhile typing about how I enjoyed this months poetry. However when trying to submit, I was bumped off, twice. So, keeping it short, good job.

I really enjoyed the metaphor about the snakes tail piercing the human condition. Another metaphor is "piece of tail" ie, vagina. Usually a serpents fangs are mentioned with the tail of destruction reserved for a scorpion.
Anyway, good job.

Now, I'm going to click 'submit', if it fails to post this time then I give up.

Well, did it work?

No?

Yes?

Whatever...

it worked!
Thanks for the advice Tao, I've had this happen here many times after the battle with the spammers was resolved.
I'm used to writing long and lengthy ramblings so it is a bit frustrating to have the gods of compute-er
whip my whims.

(I better hurry, the clock is ticking on my login)

I was referring to the poem, Lilith, and I also thought the other four poems were some of the best I've read here.

It is nice to see Mark and Iian works.

yes, a legend in my own mind AND I like pudding.

gotta rip off a quick poem now about pudding before getting 'bumped' off

Pudding

When they were done there was nothing left
nothing
and nothing tastes worse than lemon pudding
they left nothing in their feast
hollow eyes
bones
and the grim reapers peace

I, however, a legend of my own mind
decided to mix
to be quick
(or suffer the 'does not exist')
decided to mix it all together
to say to other poets, "good job"

off now to pudding
and ice cream
and (wink)
some weekend sex.