Aphelion

Excellent job. Mildly reminiscent of Fahrenheit 451 and possibly other classics I can't name.

I didn't find Neo to be very creepy; what bothered me was that the machines don't let a person's thoughts alone for a single minute. Maybe what's even more creepy are the hints that this society's electronic infrastructure is falling apart, and what that could mean for the citizens.

I hope we see more from Mr. Galindo.