Aphelion

I didn't feel any association with Star Trek, myself, which is neither good nor bad as a comment on this story. I liked the way the story focused on a very short event which was also very emotionally difficult for both parties.

Nice bit-by-bit reveal of the POV character's identity.

Quite a good job for such a young author. I believe Mr. Lerner will be going places with his writing.

Mark Edgemon wrote:

Lester Curtis wrote:...Nice bit-by-bit reveal of the POV character's identity.

I've got to work on that writing technique.

Mark! You've got to stop thinking of this as work! Writing is supposed to be fun!
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