It All Works Out in the End by Ed Sullivan

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It All Works Out in the End by Ed Sullivan

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"Short recovery period" my a--!

Good job, Ed; I laughed out loud.

Dialog was a little stiff; more contractions would loosen it up and let it move more naturally. :lol:
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