It All Works Out in the End by Ed Sullivan
Posted: August 29, 2014, 09:51:54 PM
"Short recovery period" my a--!
Good job, Ed; I laughed out loud.
Dialog was a little stiff; more contractions would loosen it up and let it move more naturally.
Good job, Ed; I laughed out loud.
Dialog was a little stiff; more contractions would loosen it up and let it move more naturally.