Aphelion

Nice tale! Good reading with a story that is not predictable and certainly not a copy!<br><br>The pace was even and the introduction of the characters came as needed and were not "forced" on the reader. <br><br>I'll be looking for more stories in the future from<br>Ee Pin Pang!!!

I'm not troubled by the pacing of this story and think it read pretty well. It had a good message and an atypical interpretation of Lucifer, one of my favorite figures. ...

Dan E.

<br>Kinda reminded me of the uberdemon D'Hoffryn from the Buffy TV series. He thought Willow had shown a flair for nasty retribution when she accidentally caused huge problems for her friends after attempting a spell that essentially made her whims come true (not just wishes -- offhand sarcastic remarks, too). He offered to make her into a Vengeance Demon (a tremendously powerful entity) -- but when she refused the offer, he just shrugged and sent her home with a standing offer to transform her if she ever changed her mind. Apparently beings of Ultimate Evil Power can be pretty easygoing when it suits 'em.<br><br>Robert M.