Re: Story: Time Amok by J. Eckert Lytle
Posted: August 20, 2015, 09:03:19 AM
An interesting story about Jack the Ripper, and one that I enjoyed reading.
A good intro in which the reader’s attention is grabbed---- one of the most important attributes that a story needs. Once the intro gets the setting established, the remainder of the story keeps one’s interest sparked by using good dialogue, humor, character traits and other techniques that evolve a story. The twist about the lesbian and a Catholic was a nice-small beat to the story.
I enjoyed to story very much and must say that I’ve read published stories that were not as good!!
A good intro in which the reader’s attention is grabbed---- one of the most important attributes that a story needs. Once the intro gets the setting established, the remainder of the story keeps one’s interest sparked by using good dialogue, humor, character traits and other techniques that evolve a story. The twist about the lesbian and a Catholic was a nice-small beat to the story.
I enjoyed to story very much and must say that I’ve read published stories that were not as good!!