Re: Fool Brittania By Gareth D. Jones
Posted: August 09, 2005, 10:57:27 AM
Yes ... they do sneak up on you. Then the next day, all your painstakingly acquired grammar and spelling skils ar gon.<br><br>Robtre M.
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<br> <br>But it was presented as a story, and my expectations were set that I would get a story. Hence, I was unsatisfied in the end. I was left with an overwhelming sense of "So what?"<br><br>don't think this really was designed as a story, more of an anecdotal spoof or a roast of british history, and as such cannot be critiqued as a story proper. thus i disagree with what Rob W. said.
<br><br>Now this elicits a prickly response. I apologize in advance.<br><br>Comedy is hard. One of the many reasons why comedy is hard is because everyone has a unique sense of humour. What works for one person may not work for another. As a result, the notion that if someone didn't enjoy a particular piece of humour, it is becuase they didn't "get it" is both useless and offensive.<br><br>For what its worth, I found bits of the story amusing, if not laugh-out-loud funny. As a matter of fact, I went to read this story first out of the issue, because I fully expected that I would enjoy it greatly. And I was disappointed, because it didn't meet my expecations.<br><br>Does that mean it was bad? Hardly. De gustibus non est disputandum, and all that. But it just didn't work for me, at least not as a whole piece.<br><br>
PS: Rob...can't believe you missed on that one! spelling and langauge issues? prominent figures? replaced by world-domination scheming aliens? come on!
<br><br>Its knot jest Birtian yu shood whirry abbot.<br><br>Robert M.I thought this was a well written story, both fun and funny. I didn't see the ending coming, and when it came I liked it. But I fear for Britain if people who aren't very good at spelling are 'oids'. I think the 'oids' are winning...
<br><br>Nah. Dubya and Dan Quayle never COULD spell.<br><br>Robert M.yeah, but Rob M, you still haven't caught on to who's also an oid. a fave or yours i think.
Lee
<br><br>We don't mind, as long as you MENTION APHELION EVERYWHERE YOU POST OR PUBLISH ANYTHING, FOREVER AND EVER (if not longer).<br><br>Robert M....Sorry, editors, for trying to entice your loyal readership to a different site.
Gareth