One Hundred Percent by Denis Winston Brum

[Lipinski]

I enjoyed the story and liked the title.

From my perspective and personal tastes... it was too 'wordy'. (Is wordy a word? If not, it should be)

Again from my perspective and personal tastes, when combining so many words together in a story, the story itself becomes covered in dust.

So, enjoyed the authors idea and story but was a bit annoyed at wordage. Though, some of the words brought to mind some ideas for other stories.