One Hundred Percent by Denis Winston Brum
Posted: December 02, 2018, 10:46:51 PM
I enjoyed the story and liked the title.
From my perspective and personal tastes... it was too 'wordy'. (Is wordy a word? If not, it should be)
Again from my perspective and personal tastes, when combining so many words together in a story, the story itself becomes covered in dust.
So, enjoyed the authors idea and story but was a bit annoyed at wordage. Though, some of the words brought to mind some ideas for other stories.
From my perspective and personal tastes... it was too 'wordy'. (Is wordy a word? If not, it should be)
Again from my perspective and personal tastes, when combining so many words together in a story, the story itself becomes covered in dust.
So, enjoyed the authors idea and story but was a bit annoyed at wordage. Though, some of the words brought to mind some ideas for other stories.