Aphelion

I like it. The descriptions with all the graphic and interesting use of words and word choices became a pleasure as I read. I felt like I were in Venice at times. Writing in the first person has many advantages: A closeness can be felt which gets us into the story better than the third person.

And what a story it is! A quill with magical properties that writes down what the authors' inner feeling really want. Sometimes we want things and don’t know that we want them.

A very good story and one that I enjoyed. A must read for all!


Very good job!