Forgotten Girl by J. Nichols
Posted: May 06, 2019, 10:16:57 PM
Good job.
Usually 95% of what I read quickly bores what is inside, (aside from poetry. poetry rules all literature and when put to music, there is nothing better a human can produce... of course, all in my humble opinion). This piece though, caught my attention; first by title and then by content.
Not too many words as such the words used were used wisely.
Nice flow and plot.
Painted a nice picture.
Good job.
Usually 95% of what I read quickly bores what is inside, (aside from poetry. poetry rules all literature and when put to music, there is nothing better a human can produce... of course, all in my humble opinion). This piece though, caught my attention; first by title and then by content.
Not too many words as such the words used were used wisely.
Nice flow and plot.
Painted a nice picture.
Good job.