Re: Too Late the Hero by Gareth Jones
Posted: December 04, 2005, 11:32:07 PM
I liked this, but thought it was too simple in some places and not taken full advantage of. I think not fleshing the main character out was a mistake; a lot could've been made of his situation if he'd been more of a person and not so much of a caricature.<br><br>The story was entertaining for what it was, but frankly it wasn't much.<br><br>~MM