Re: Born Under Punches by Mark Aspillera
Posted: October 02, 2005, 04:30:29 PM
I liked it. <br><br>The protagonist starts with a problem and at least a partial solution (he gets a name). Meanwhile, warehouses worth of SF furniture flies at us like a hailstorm. <br><br>I like that we get a short piece where the author doesn't feel the need to explain every last detail. I think at novel length, I would suffer from not being able to form a mental picture. But at this length--yes a riff--just bring on the sense of wonder. It works for me.<br><br>I've seen this sort of weird riffing published in The Third Alternative, although that's nothing compared to the weirdness of the artwork. They changed the name after my subscription lapsed (I'm not suggesting causal link??). I think it's Black Static or something.<br><br>So everyone has to be fit in Mark's story. Nanny state gone mad? Fitness leads to productivity? I don't know, but sometimes I would rather wonder for myself than be told. <br><br>I thought Mark made the Reebok comment more for the irony (since the story is centred on running shoes).<br><br>Tim<br>