Exile by Jakob Angerer
Posted: December 10, 2021, 11:00:01 AM
The intro is active in getting one’s attention.
A short one here similar to flash fiction.
Internal thoughts are the story in this story. What type of punishment given him, the judge mush have known about the creatures that lurked there. I'm assuming a barren planet or possibly some large moon is the environment give to him because of his political alliance.
Whatever, the creature got him at the end.
Nice job!
A short one here similar to flash fiction.
Internal thoughts are the story in this story. What type of punishment given him, the judge mush have known about the creatures that lurked there. I'm assuming a barren planet or possibly some large moon is the environment give to him because of his political alliance.
Whatever, the creature got him at the end.
Nice job!