Re: JXR by David Alan Jones
Posted: February 25, 2008, 10:43:17 PM
A nice, very smooth story that holds ones interest. I like that. Good word choices, proper sentence lengths--all put together with a fluid use of language. Nice!
I enjoy reading David’s works very much because of his superb style. And the stories are always interesting. Even if the story-line is average, David, I believe, can take just about any story and turn it into an enjoyable read.
I love the AI’s voice inside Carl’s head, love the futuristic world of virtual realities, and like how a detective in those new and exciting future worlds might act!
Many thanks to jaimie's critique---it pointed me to David’s story. I haven't read many serials or novellas.
Nice job!!
;)
I enjoy reading David’s works very much because of his superb style. And the stories are always interesting. Even if the story-line is average, David, I believe, can take just about any story and turn it into an enjoyable read.
I love the AI’s voice inside Carl’s head, love the futuristic world of virtual realities, and like how a detective in those new and exciting future worlds might act!
Many thanks to jaimie's critique---it pointed me to David’s story. I haven't read many serials or novellas.
Nice job!!
;)