Posted: September 21, 2008, 08:53:28 AM
A good story line, and one that should be developed more.
The writing became choppy, and at times it didn’t hold my interest. Others probably don’t agree. I don’t like author Nelson Algren for the same reasons, yet he was a very successful writer following Theodore Dreiser’s thoughts on society. I love Dreiser, but can’t read Algren.
To me a little choppy and hard to follow.
But over-all the story showed a writer with talent and imagination.
Good attempt a story-telling.
Megawatts
The writing became choppy, and at times it didn’t hold my interest. Others probably don’t agree. I don’t like author Nelson Algren for the same reasons, yet he was a very successful writer following Theodore Dreiser’s thoughts on society. I love Dreiser, but can’t read Algren.
To me a little choppy and hard to follow.
But over-all the story showed a writer with talent and imagination.
Good attempt a story-telling.
Megawatts