Insurrection

[Megawatts]

A space story set in the future with robots, space stations, and mining that shows up in many stories about troubles on other worlds.

The writing good, the character development Okay, and the action flowing enough to hold one’s interest.

A little research on burning torches and welding techniques would have helped in this one.

Again, a little sensory input would have added much to this one.

The scene of the robots cutting and skinning their victums really jumped out at me, and added another dimension to this story that I didn't see coming! Nice direction indicating that robots are not all like R2D2 and CPO3 or whatever they are called in Star Wars!! I think we need more blood and guts when robots are involved.


All in all a good space story that was captivating and held my interest.

Nice Job!!!