Posted: January 18, 2009, 11:18:49 AM
The old bar scene where a customer has a story to tell.
Captivating story, characters came alive, and the dialogue was crafted well.
The author has a nice ability to take a mundane encounter and turn it into
an interesting story. Good, I like that. Real creativity can do just that!!
Nice one!
Captivating story, characters came alive, and the dialogue was crafted well.
The author has a nice ability to take a mundane encounter and turn it into
an interesting story. Good, I like that. Real creativity can do just that!!
Nice one!