Posted: April 12, 2009, 10:20:59 AM
One mistake I found. Gettysburg and the surrounding country-side was Union territory and not Rebel during the civil war.
I like Jeani’s stories very much and look forward to reading them.
Her writing is clear, easy to follow, detailed and fluid. And her dialogue is very good following real-time speaking by using good technique. There is always great word choices, and in many of her stories new word usages, new choices of words in description, and new and interesting usages of descriptive adjectives. Nice.
The balances in this story between dialogue and narration are very well thought out, and it works!!
The story is eerie and very entertaining. It reminded me a little of Slaughter House Five but it was not a copy of it.
A good one, and one that should be studied a little for it fine Story telling!
Loved it!
I like Jeani’s stories very much and look forward to reading them.
Her writing is clear, easy to follow, detailed and fluid. And her dialogue is very good following real-time speaking by using good technique. There is always great word choices, and in many of her stories new word usages, new choices of words in description, and new and interesting usages of descriptive adjectives. Nice.
The balances in this story between dialogue and narration are very well thought out, and it works!!
The story is eerie and very entertaining. It reminded me a little of Slaughter House Five but it was not a copy of it.
A good one, and one that should be studied a little for it fine Story telling!
Loved it!