Posted: June 23, 2010, 11:35:00 AM
Thanks, Bill. I did get a little help from that email exchange, but I don't recall too much specifically. I know I had been thinking of including something about insurance, and someone suggested not to.
Bottomdweller, I'm glad you like it. One of the things I enjoy is seeing how people view things. You see:
I did want to mention that the formatting got a little bollixed . . . the last line of each verse was supposed to be indented. Also, the first line of the fourth verse should read, "We have a partnership in trading esoteric goods,"
Thanks for the comments.
Uh, Rick? What's this? (Thanks, btw.)A little concrete over that hole won't work either.
Bottomdweller, I'm glad you like it. One of the things I enjoy is seeing how people view things. You see:
I look at "the last two ever built on Earth," and I ask, why was this thing being discontinued? Did they go out of business because of a lousy reputation? Were these the only things the guy could afford? She did die in a crash, after all . . . life is tough out there . . .Small details like the Ephemis Class ship being the last one built on Earth are very nice. I like that – the love of a well-built machine –
I did want to mention that the formatting got a little bollixed . . . the last line of each verse was supposed to be indented. Also, the first line of the fourth verse should read, "We have a partnership in trading esoteric goods,"
Thanks for the comments.