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Posted: September 08, 2010, 07:43:14 PM
by Lester Curtis
The last word-object is "prais".
Tao, what were you reading?

As for the poem . . . the subject matter is too preachy, and that rhyme scheme -- ka-THUD ka-THUD ka-THUD ka-THUD . . . ought to be punishable, but I'm at a loss as to what an appropriate sentence would be . . .

. . . in its favor -- at least it could be understood, instead of needing to be decoded.