Posted: August 11, 2010, 12:21:25 AM
Outstanding story; it's just got so much going on, what with a manipulative Mad Scientist, smuggling, conspiracies, alien intelligence(s) and a touch of the supernatural, with auras and astral projection. It all works very well together, too, which is a bit surprising to me.
Excellent. I didn't see any indication that this is indeed part of a serial, but if it is, I'll certainly relish the rest of it.
I think Mr. Kraus needs to work on his story titles, though . . . "Abc and the Xyz" is a title form that I think a lot of people associate with juvenile fiction, if not outright rubbish. Maybe it's just me, but I think this deserves better.
Excellent. I didn't see any indication that this is indeed part of a serial, but if it is, I'll certainly relish the rest of it.
I think Mr. Kraus needs to work on his story titles, though . . . "Abc and the Xyz" is a title form that I think a lot of people associate with juvenile fiction, if not outright rubbish. Maybe it's just me, but I think this deserves better.