Aphelion

Posted: **August 06, 2010, 10:07:09 PM**

Seems like second-person POV is becoming a little more common, and this story proves its power.

Very well done!

Posted: **August 29, 2010, 01:39:37 PM**

Nice experimental work. Love the 2ed person attempt and liked the story from beginning to end. It held my attention, and that is good story-telling.

Good one

Aphelion

The Weaver of Gossamer Webs By jaimie l. elliott