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Off Road
Posted: July 10, 2007, 11:18:58 AM
by Robert_Moriyama
Way off road. This story starts off peculiar and gets stranger as it goes. Philip K. Dick might approve.
Robert M.
Re: Off Road
Posted: July 27, 2007, 12:17:37 PM
by kailhofer
I'm not good at reading stories like this. Much like the protagonist winds up, they leave me adrift at sea--but a sea of confusion.
Anyone care to explain what in the heck this was all about? Descent into madness?
Also, I felt the language of the first two paragraphs to be rather off-putting. I speak more formally than most, but this seemed way over the top, as if the author was exercising his vocabulary far more than his writing skills.
Nate