Scorpion by John Frazee
Posted: November 11, 2010, 11:50:37 AM
I thought this was going to be a disappointing rehash, but the last verse redeemed it a little.
It would have been better with more work to get the meter consistent.
Not great, but it's better than I thought it would be.
It would have been better with more work to get the meter consistent.
Not great, but it's better than I thought it would be.