Ghost by Robyn Green
Posted: August 12, 2011, 12:29:30 AM
It's unusual to find a 'surprise ending' story that works as well as this one . . . I like this writer.
Proofreading has its benefits; I spotted a few technical glitches: phrases repeated, or sometimes missing a word. Aside from that, I enjoyed it, mostly for it's eccentricity. Characterization was quite good, and I enjoyed the little bit of sibling rivalry. Strangers' reactions kept me intrigued.
Not bad.
Proofreading has its benefits; I spotted a few technical glitches: phrases repeated, or sometimes missing a word. Aside from that, I enjoyed it, mostly for it's eccentricity. Characterization was quite good, and I enjoyed the little bit of sibling rivalry. Strangers' reactions kept me intrigued.
Not bad.