The Unboxing by Mark Ward
Posted: November 21, 2011, 12:41:47 AM
Jolly good stuff, I say . . .
Mr. Ward has given us a delightful, tongue-in-cheek steampunk story wherein Lord Auldsworthy is gently coerced into sharing his new toy with his family and household staff -- all of whom know more about it than he does.
The language and setting are wonderful; indeed, the language is part of the setting. Great fun to read.
The only thing I found that seemed incorrect was a mention of a "Turkey carpet," and I can't even be sure the author didn't mean "Turkish carpet." The apparent mistake may have actually been an example of an archaic usage. Maybe Mr. Ward will tell us.
Mr. Ward has given us a delightful, tongue-in-cheek steampunk story wherein Lord Auldsworthy is gently coerced into sharing his new toy with his family and household staff -- all of whom know more about it than he does.
The language and setting are wonderful; indeed, the language is part of the setting. Great fun to read.
The only thing I found that seemed incorrect was a mention of a "Turkey carpet," and I can't even be sure the author didn't mean "Turkish carpet." The apparent mistake may have actually been an example of an archaic usage. Maybe Mr. Ward will tell us.