Walking by Anthony Bell
Posted: March 22, 2012, 07:58:02 PM
I found this one pretty good, which surprised me, seeing that there's hardly any dialog in it at all. But the rhythm of the narrative drives it along quite well.
I was somewhat confused about the sequence of events in the story; a good portion of the latter part of it is a flashback, but that isn't completely evident until the end.
Fairly well structured, with a decent plot and an exciting action sequence. Excellent setting description, which does double duty to set the mood. The characters come through quite well, considering the spare dialog and description of them.
Good job, overall.
I was somewhat confused about the sequence of events in the story; a good portion of the latter part of it is a flashback, but that isn't completely evident until the end.
Fairly well structured, with a decent plot and an exciting action sequence. Excellent setting description, which does double duty to set the mood. The characters come through quite well, considering the spare dialog and description of them.
Good job, overall.