Aphelion

Mostly typical zombie fare, but very well written. I didn't notice a single technical error.

Scary, too.

I liked the fact that the two uninfected people didn't both make it to safety, though I felt bad about it. Esme, after all, is the one character that we actually get to know, and she was very well portrayed. But, hey, that's what the end of the world is all about.

Excellent job.

Well, welcome to the forum, Asura. While you're here, I would hope that you would vote in the Flash challenge (and I'm not alone in hoping that).

Stick around and enjoy the forums!

Set it in a large religious cathedral (or in a football stadium, or in a political rally) with hundreds of brain dead zombies in attendance...or would anybody notice

There, Mark -- fixed it for ya.