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Lester Curtis
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Toasted Naboo on a stick

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That poor Naboo guy is doomed . . . his expression is dazed, and he isn't using a bit of situational awareness . . . besides, his weapon is clearly damaged (the sighting device is quite out of alignment).

I would have built the tunnel with a bend in it, with the Darth being concealed around the corner, so that the only thing visible to the Naboo would be one of the lightsaber's beams. I guess it's supposed to be awfully dark in there, though, so maybe that doesn't matter.

Anyway, nice work, as always. Thanks.
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